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ode to a random stoner that i always see in the school parking lot

random stoner, in your car
i can see you from afar.
high myself, from where i sit
i could see that monster hit.
i hope that you wont mind my stare
as you spray glade into the air
i saw you here the other day,
light one up and rip away
someday when im not late for class
we will surely pass the grass

Submitted by: lowengineoil 8 weeks 3 days ago – Made popular 8 weeks 3 days ago
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haha i like it dude

thats the shit

good shit

That's some poetic shit you got going!

Hahha I do that shit every morning before class also!

love it cus im ether the one staring or the one being stared at just chillin smokin a j b4 school i have walked up to other kids like hittin bowls and shit with a j in my mouth and been lik ewhy hello there fellor stoner wopuld u like a drag oif my j for a hit of the bowl/? they r usually cool about it to yeah really high right now so spelling it not a concern

you spelled pretty good for a high person

well i was thinking of the poem when i was super blazed but when i wrote it down i wasnt that high anymore so it was no problem haha

>your mind is a mountain before you>

That was beautiful. I hope you two meet up and share a FAT bowl.

hahahaha nice rhyme

props dude

there's a lot of shit in these comments ahaha xD
but amazing poem I LOVE IT! :D

"There he goes. One of God's own prototypes. A high-powered mutant of some kind never even considered for mass production. Too weird to live, and too rare to die."

That was beautifl.

MssTnM

Ask them to smoke with you!

Nice poem, by the way.

dude you rip that shit out for home boy in the parking lot he will surely tear one down with you major props

nice poem!

beautiful man

Awesome shit man. Keep it up looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

agree.

str8 poetry at its finest

that was sooo wonderful :)

YES!
smoking in school parking lots are the shit :)
but fuck the cops who patrol the parking lot :P

dude you should totally get that published :)

daaaaamn 204 ups and 0 down. why is this SO good?

I LOVE that. You sir, are an art.

Nice man. Keep it up! This is some good stuff.

brought a tear to my eye

sick deal.