why do people buy in to the bullshit for their hole lives?
believe rehearsed lies
influence their lives and become hypnotized
humans like robots with monkey minds
doesn't anyone think its time
if they dont see it then its not a crime
ya fucking right
used to stay in the dark now live in the light
and i shine so bright
blow dro elevate to a new height
with every last breathe i promise ill fight
stand firm in the dirt burn chron through the night
no matter what never lose sight
i can never turn back im in way too deep
gotta watch my back with my 3rd eye wen im asleep
break the cycle so sick of repeat
no matter what they do never retreat
power from my head to my feet
maybe its all just energy
breathe another puff of the weed
ready to bring the beast to its knees
im tired of saying please
i want what belongs to you and me
i want every one to finally be free

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Fri, 04/06/2012 - 1:44pm
Baked_Lays Says:

I usually skip over these poems/rhymes but yours is exceptionally cool

 
 
Wed, 06/13/2012 - 7:43pm

I'll read them, but at least half the time they dissapoint or I just lose interest. But this one kept me hanging on each line, I was enthralled throughout. It was definitely one of the better rap/poems on here

 
 
Thu, 08/02/2012 - 6:08pm

Come on lays you got to love my stuff ;)

 
 
Sun, 07/22/2012 - 10:49pm

I like this. I had a problem trying get by the line, "i can never turn back im in way too deep
gotta watch my back with my 3rd eye wen im asleep". But, maybe that's just me.

 
 
Fri, 08/03/2012 - 2:23pm
Tokingaway Says:

What he is truly referring to is actually the third eye of the illuminati. And/or the all seeing eye. A reference would be on the back of the dollar bill. Or the triangle that jay Z holds up in front of his left eye. "He can't stop he is in way too deep" is just another reference that rappers use to say that they have become too evolved In satanism and have already sold their souls to the devil. Once you are in you can not get out; or atleast you die trying. I.e. biggie and tupac shakur.

 
 
Sat, 07/28/2012 - 3:32am

not bad at all man, you've got a nice flow going there

"with every last breathe i promise ill fight
stand firm in the dirt burn chron through the night"
^favorite lines by far, keep up the writing man, kudos

 
 
Sat, 07/28/2012 - 9:48am
 
 
Tue, 07/31/2012 - 6:12pm
retrosisko Says:

So what is it we're not seeing? Please, enlighten the class..

 
 
Wed, 08/01/2012 - 3:46pm
bakayurei Says:

society's negative image of weed and weed smokers is based on a lie

 
 
Wed, 08/01/2012 - 3:42pm
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Wed, 08/01/2012 - 3:48pm
bakayurei Says:

reading it out loud, there are a couple of parts that seem to break the flow, but otherwise, very good work

 
 
Wed, 08/01/2012 - 5:57pm

If you read it backwards it sounds selfish/weird when stoned(=

 
 
Wed, 08/01/2012 - 10:09pm
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Thu, 08/02/2012 - 7:57pm
Crazyj420 Says:

You see a huge amount or raps/poems on here and a good bit of them aren't good at all, but man some of these people are fucking class poets. Great job bro I like it

 
 
Fri, 08/03/2012 - 1:00am
 
 
Fri, 08/03/2012 - 1:35pm

Im Pretty High So It Took Me A Minute To Realize It Was Rhyming, But Then I Re-Read It And Its Dope As Hell. Nice Job :)
~Nette♥

 
 
Fri, 08/03/2012 - 3:46pm

It sounded good... The only problem is that your poem follows a VERY robotic rhyming scheme... Which seems hypocritical. haha.

 
 
Fri, 08/03/2012 - 7:06pm

haha i think if i spit it it would sound different but i see what your saying

 
 
Sun, 08/05/2012 - 7:29pm

my opinion is true rap is a form of poetry, i really dig this rhyme though man. dope shit. keep doin what your doin.

 
 
Sat, 10/06/2012 - 7:11pm
mindgames Says:

This is dope. They can't get a hold of our spiritual dna.