I think Dr. Seuss had Glaucoma.
green eggs indeed
thats a pretty sick song dude, you can shred the guitar. it kinda reminds me of a jack white type of style. especially with that drummer, he sounds just like meg white cuz he's kinda off timing for most of it lol. i mean he's not that bad, but could def use some work haha. but dude shitty drummer aside, i really like your guitar style. i feel like if you found a good bass player who can compliment your style, you'd really have something legit. also, this could just be a personal thing but i feel like lyrics should always serve as an instrument first, and story telling device second. vocals should really add something to a song, otherwise they just distract people from the actual music. and when you've got a singer who can't quite hit any notes on key, it REALLY takes away from the music. if you want lyrics you have to make sure they make the song better, not worse. and it's tough because out of anyone in the band, it's easiest for a singer to make something sound bad, and almost just as easy for a drummer to fuck it up. sorry, this is just some constructive criticism, take it or leave it, but i think your vocalist holds you back, and so does your drummer, because you're pretty sick at guitar. if you're going for vocals, make sure theyre sick vocals, otherwise, don't even bother with them. a lot of music doesn't need lyrics, especially if you have some shreddin' guitar.
thanks man! this is why i love highdeas and public forums, people will give their honest opinion because they're not worried about offending the person.
about your advice. well me and the drummer have definitely improved since this songs inception and i think a lot of it has to do with the quality of the recording. I'm still not that good at recording but this newer song of mine is recorded better and we've improved as musicians as well.
I actually had my brother play bass on 'green eggs and bam' (which you can hear more clearly during the solo) but it doesnt come out that great because everything was recorded live with an ipod touch. (vocals were dubbed later and recorded with ipod too)
im singing btw. and i know my voice sucks. but im improving and would like to find a singer but its tough these days.
He removed all the commas from the original title I guess
I should drop my balls in your eye sockets,
With 5 rockets attached to me side pockets.
That's neat, bad meat turns to sad beef in these mad streets.
Your dad queefs, and you sniff it up.
Like a spliff, you puff.
My piff is tough, it will split you up like a ginsu cut.
Go lick a butt.
i guess as dr suess aged his rhyme techniques have modernized. can doctor suess hook me and some friends up with some sprite? some krispy kremes too if possible
I think Suess was colorblind.....or was trippin on somethin intense d:
roses are red,
violets are red,
the grass is red,
fuck, my yard's on fire
From his 'the eye book'. ''They look down holes, they look up poles.'' puts a bad image in my head when I'm reading to a kid. Not cool Seuss
He was challenged by a friend to write a book that only had 50 words so he gave us green eggs and ham.